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This week’s prompt: “But there was a criminal”
Word limit: 33 words
Fiction
Ruthless Awakening
A balmy morning, gentle breeze sauntering across the corridors sent an alluring invite. She thus ran across, bare feet. She stopped midway to drench in the shower of the golden rays, filling her heart with Read more…
14 Comments
Corina Carrasco · October 24, 2017 at 8:01 am
Very nicely done.
canvaswithrainbow · October 24, 2017 at 8:54 am
Thanks Corina for visiting and encouraging!
Namy · October 24, 2017 at 8:11 am
Reminded me of Fanaa. Enjoyed your take on the prompt. #MicroMondays
canvaswithrainbow · October 24, 2017 at 8:55 am
You are right Namratha. I had same thought when I read the prompt. Thanks for visiting.
Iain Kelly · October 24, 2017 at 8:50 am
Always falling for the bad guys! A lot in those 33 words, good one.
canvaswithrainbow · October 24, 2017 at 8:57 am
Yeh… its easy to fall for bad things than rise for the gud one!! Thanks Ian for visiting and encouraging.
Varadharajan · October 24, 2017 at 10:25 am
The charming rascal! They always get the girl, right? Nice use of the prompt, Anagha.
canvaswithrainbow · October 24, 2017 at 11:06 am
Gullible desi belle and the charming monsters, make for a sad ending tale.
Thanks Varad for visiting and appreciating!
Shweta · October 24, 2017 at 12:22 pm
A terrorist! Oh no. Poor desi Belle. Great take on the prompt, Anagha.
canvaswithrainbow · October 25, 2017 at 12:26 pm
Thank you Shweta for visiting. Glad that you loved this tale.
Akshata Ram · October 24, 2017 at 6:11 pm
that was so sad- liked the story you weaved around the prompt Anagha
canvaswithrainbow · October 25, 2017 at 12:27 pm
Deceptive looks, what else! Thanks Akshata for visiting. Glad that you liked my take.
Lavanya Srinivasan · October 25, 2017 at 5:00 pm
Oh oh. Sad state of affairs. Well written!
canvaswithrainbow · October 26, 2017 at 7:18 am
Thanks Lavanya!