“Boss, got the
tip from the security, Lunch Box has entered the premises of Galleria Mall.
Eagle-eye spotted him entering Screen 2”.
“Lets give him
company. Lets have a cinematic climax” said the cocky voice.
The vehicles
of the Growling gang steered clear the busy streets and
reached the parking lot. Half an hour already had passed by. Chicken-Makhana
was about to get out of the Prado on level 5, he saw the Audi A5 leaving the
Row F.
“Boss, LucnhBox
got the wings”.
Rushing inside
the vehicle, the G gang followed the Audi. Not bothering about the mall goers,
it ravaged through the lives and vehicles alike. Fire shots now
replaced the ruckus at the parking. Blood stains and rivers of blood and flesh
were strewn across the entire floor.
The walls,
floor and the pillars stood mute witness to the cries of innocent revelers. 

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Word Count: 146
Its my contribution to #FridayFotoFiction by Tina and Mayuri


8 Comments

Deliciously Alive · October 17, 2017 at 2:31 pm

This is so terrible! Something we wish never , ever happens!
Is this a new blog, Anagha?

    canvaswithrainbow · October 17, 2017 at 2:47 pm

    Thanks Mayuri for visiting. You guessed it right. It my new solo endevour. I will continue to write for MocktailMommies too! So hv 2 babies now!
    As for this take on prompt, its so gory! Good lord its just a fiction!

Gaurav Yadav · October 18, 2017 at 7:12 am

Impressed with the Variety. Good job Anagha.

    canvaswithrainbow · October 19, 2017 at 6:53 am

    Thank you so much Gaurav for uplifting remarks! Your words of praises boosted my spirit!

The R.Viewer · October 18, 2017 at 7:29 am

This is stepping out of the box type of blog. Takes guts to develop such content. I'm expecting improvement Ana. Unleash the mind.
– Zoplus

    canvaswithrainbow · October 19, 2017 at 6:54 am

    Thank you for a shower of praises and encouragements Yuvi! And yes, every day I find the room for improvement in my writings… Wish this learning never ceases!

Tina Basu · October 19, 2017 at 12:43 pm

OMG this is a gory tale! Congrats on your new blog. Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction

    canvaswithrainbow · October 19, 2017 at 4:40 pm

    Thanks Tina for wishes.
    The gang wars always had been gory. Here the mute witness are non living things. In actual life, even though the human beings are witness to it, they prefer to be silent spectators. And that is disturbing.

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