I was over the moon. Coming
out of the dark, I was not sure as to where I am.
out of the dark, I was not sure as to where I am.
I was primed up with snow white silk-satin clothes. My look was complete with a hood that was cushy white
and had a handmade lily-white lace at the edges. Admiration in the eyes of the
onlookers conveyed that I looked just perfect!
and had a handmade lily-white lace at the edges. Admiration in the eyes of the
onlookers conveyed that I looked just perfect!
I was placed at a vantage
position. The gleaming yellow lights were now trained on me, giving me the princely
aura. I just couldn’t have asked for anymore!
position. The gleaming yellow lights were now trained on me, giving me the princely
aura. I just couldn’t have asked for anymore!
But I missed those bear hugs,
buttery touches, warm snuggles, cries and giggles…
buttery touches, warm snuggles, cries and giggles…
As the days changed to months,
I was no more prim and proper. One fine day, I was handed over to the
orphanage. I was orphaned at the birth
in a swanky showroom!
I was no more prim and proper. One fine day, I was handed over to the
orphanage. I was orphaned at the birth
in a swanky showroom!
13 Comments
WriteMighty · November 21, 2017 at 9:52 am
This is a very different take, Anagha. Tbh, I read it twice to understand. And when I did. I was like wow. This is unexpected. Extremely nice take on the prompt, bud. 🙂
canvaswithrainbow · November 21, 2017 at 10:00 am
Thank you so much for reading it twice. Thank you for appreciation!
Rahul Pagad · November 21, 2017 at 11:12 am
Amazing!! I didn't expect that one.. Awesome take on the prompt. My vote goes to you 🙂 🙂
Regards
Rahul
canvaswithrainbow · November 22, 2017 at 1:51 am
Thanks for praises Rahul! I owe you dear!
meha sharma · November 21, 2017 at 2:38 pm
This was a unique take! Wonderful narration, I must say!
canvaswithrainbow · November 22, 2017 at 1:51 am
Thanks Neha for appreciation! Thanks for visiting.
Deliciously Alive · November 22, 2017 at 4:21 am
Ah! The fate of the crib! Fantastic take on the prompt, Anagha! You are getting awesome at fiction!
Thank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction
canvaswithrainbow · November 22, 2017 at 10:39 am
Thank you so much Mayuri for the appreciation! It means a lot to me! Every prompt, right since beginning has been a choicest selection. Its absolutely fun and thrill to write for #FridayFotoFiction
Rohan Kachalia · November 22, 2017 at 7:18 am
Wow! What a take on the prompt, Anagha! One of the best I've read in quite a while.
canvaswithrainbow · November 22, 2017 at 10:40 am
Humbled by the shower of praises and appreciation Rohan. Thanks for visiting !
Tina Basu · November 23, 2017 at 1:52 pm
This was a very unique take Anagha. The fate of the display crib! Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction.
canvaswithrainbow · November 28, 2017 at 1:22 am
Thanks Tina!
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