It was a long way up! His reassuring grip on her wrist was all that she needed.
The naughty strands of hair occasionally fluttered across her face. This site made him want to stare at her rather than climbing up. Upon sensing the pause in the gait, she would smile. Blushed cheeks would leave the wild flowers way behind in race of enchanting him!
Once on the top, negotiating the stony ridges they nestled up.
“Like your eyes the lake is blue green and crystal clear.”
“And, the mountains?”, she gestured at him, resting her head on to his shoulders.
“Rugged, rough like me”, he responded.
“Together is the wonderful place to be”, she whispered, making a big heart in air with her hands.
The wind took a pause, the sky leaned, the mountains peeked at the charming couple with awe…
For she was blind and he was deaf!
16 Comments
sudha krishnan · December 9, 2017 at 8:48 am
jolly good story. Trust you to come out with new ideas.
canvaswithrainbow · December 9, 2017 at 2:16 pm
Thanks Sudha. Glad you loved it.
Shalzzzz · December 9, 2017 at 11:39 am
That's a sweet tale, Anagha. Love it!
canvaswithrainbow · December 9, 2017 at 2:17 pm
Yeh! Thats something! Thanks Shalini for visiting.
Surbhi Prapanna · December 9, 2017 at 1:55 pm
really a good story, I truly believed that together is the most wonderful place to be.
canvaswithrainbow · December 9, 2017 at 2:18 pm
Agree you Surabhi. Thanks for visiting.
Lavanya Srinivasan · December 9, 2017 at 3:35 pm
Wow, such an inspiring take. Great write, Anagha!
canvaswithrainbow · December 9, 2017 at 5:15 pm
Thanks Lavanya for the uplifting comment!
Akshata Ram · December 10, 2017 at 9:32 am
Wonderful Anagha
canvaswithrainbow · December 10, 2017 at 9:52 am
Thank you Akshata.
meha sharma · December 12, 2017 at 6:43 pm
Beautiful! You have a way with words. Always love your narration…
canvaswithrainbow · December 13, 2017 at 12:14 pm
Oh Meha… Iove the way you lift up my spirits with your positive affirmations! Thank you for visiting and appreciation.
WriteMighty · December 13, 2017 at 5:04 am
Anagha! M in awe of your writing. I couldn't write for this prompt, had i written my story would have been on the same grounds as yours. But, m sure, my story wouldn't have been as great as yours. This is just…. 🙂 Xoxoxo
canvaswithrainbow · December 13, 2017 at 12:15 pm
Missing your presence dear! And had you attempted it, it would have come fab with a special touch that only you can give! Thanks for visiting and praising my efforts…
Deliciously Alive · December 13, 2017 at 4:09 pm
Together is a wonderful place to be indeed! Commendable that despite their disabilities they made the trek!
Thank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction
Tina Basu · December 13, 2017 at 7:30 pm
aww that was very sweet. Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction.