was running behind the schedule. Upon ringing the bell and then waiting for a
while, a lady opened the door. 
Still looking inside, she shouted, “Lower the TV
the final match of Kabaddi league”, came a reply.
turned and asked, “What do you want?”
am a plumber, you had called…”
letting me complete, she frowned. “Is this the time to arrive? Anyway, get in. There’s
a leak in the bathroom”.
turned and started walking inside.
The TV
commentator was raking up the memories of Kabaddi stars from past. Sepiaish photos
were flashed on the screen along with the names.
stumbled at the carpet… I
pulled my cap further on forehead and flipped the ID card.
Though I was not in the prime of my age, spirit of Kabaddi glimmered in my heart!
are you waiting for?”, summoned a rude voice.
— § § § § § —
Word Count: 149

Its my contribution to #FridayFotoFiction by Tina and Mayuri

Categories: Flash Fiction


Varadharajan · November 13, 2017 at 12:48 pm

Fantastic take on the prompt, Anagha. One of the best I've read this week.

    canvaswithrainbow · November 13, 2017 at 4:04 pm

    Thank you so much Varad for encouraging remarks! It really made my day!

Akshata Ram · November 13, 2017 at 6:50 pm

Brilliant Anagha~

    canvaswithrainbow · November 14, 2017 at 3:56 am

    Thank you so much Akshata for the praises! Happy that you loved it!

sudha krishnan · November 14, 2017 at 7:47 am

Fabulous take on the prompt. I read that twice.

Gaurav Yadav · November 14, 2017 at 9:21 am

Friday Fiction ke sath Kabaddi ko bhi badhaawa diya ja raha hai. Waise yeh ek acchi kahani hai.

meha sharma · November 14, 2017 at 10:57 am

Lovely take on the prompt! Wonderful 🙂

    canvaswithrainbow · November 14, 2017 at 11:17 am

    Thanks Meha for visiting and appreciating my take. Happy that it was a good read for you!

Deliciously Alive · November 14, 2017 at 4:12 pm

Simply fabulous, Anagha! Loved this take on the prompt! Thank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction

    canvaswithrainbow · November 14, 2017 at 4:28 pm

    Thanks Mayuri for praising my efforts. Its a pleasure to write for #FridayFotoFiction

Tina Basu · November 16, 2017 at 12:29 pm

beautiful Anagha, Lost star! Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction.

    canvaswithrainbow · November 16, 2017 at 12:44 pm

    Thanks Tina for appreciating, as always! The prompts of #FridayFotoFiction lets me be creative!

Reshu Katiyar · November 17, 2017 at 5:23 am

Nice one with Kabbaddi season. Would love your visit at my space https://zindagieveryday.blogspot.in/

    canvaswithrainbow · November 17, 2017 at 5:56 am

    You are right Reshu, recently we had a the kabbadi league! Thanks for visiting and sharing your thoughts.

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